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2020年10月24日

雅思大作文題目

是否應該限制報紙電視中的犯罪描寫？

Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV programs has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

解 析

題材：媒體

題型：Discussion

關鍵詞：

criminal description

newspaper and TV programs

restricted

需要討論的觀點：

報紙和電視節(jié)目中的犯罪描寫是否應該限制？

建議思路：

一邊倒（的確應該限制），給出2-3個理由。

復現(xiàn)情況：疑似重復2011年10月29日題目

審 題

上周雅思作文要求大家討論的是應該發(fā)展本國影視還是引進外國影視，唐老師在分析這個題目的時候，列舉了近幾年雅思考試中關于“影視”的題目，其中兩個題目如下：

Films and computer games containing violence are popular now. Some people think they have a negative effect on society and should be banned while other people think they are harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（2011/10/29）

是否應該禁止暴力電影和電腦游戲？

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （2017/5/20）

為了降低犯罪率，政府應該控制暴力影視，你是否同意這個觀點？

這兩個題目都涉及是否應該禁止或控制媒體（影視、電腦游戲、報紙等）中的暴力因素。

不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，這些題目都與本周題目高度相關。

題目中存在一個因果關系，即“媒體中的犯罪細節(jié)描寫會產(chǎn)生不好的后果，因此應該限制”。

對于這種有因果關系的題目，我們的思路不外乎可以有以下幾種：

1.承認原因，也承認結果：描寫犯罪細節(jié)會產(chǎn)生不好的后果，因此的確該限制。

2.承認原因，但不承認結果：描寫犯罪細節(jié)會產(chǎn)生不好的后果，但不該限制（限制會引起其他問題，而且還有其他更好的辦法來解決不好的后果）。

3. 不承認原因，但承認結果：應該限制犯罪細節(jié)描寫，但并不是因為這樣做會產(chǎn)生不好的后果，而是有其他原因。

4.不承認原因，也不承認結果：描寫犯罪細節(jié)不會產(chǎn)生什么不好的后果，因此限制是沒有道理的。

就本題而言，我們可以用一邊倒的結構來展開論證：完全同意應該限制媒體對犯罪進行細節(jié)描寫。

理由有三：首先，從物質(zhì)層面看，報紙或電視中的犯罪細節(jié)描寫可能讓人，尤其是年輕人，模仿傷害他人的方式；其次，從心理層面上，媒體中犯罪細節(jié)太多，容易讓人產(chǎn)生這個世界不安全的感覺，從而影響其對世界的看法，并產(chǎn)生多種多樣的社會后果。

但我們也可以用分類討論的結構來展開論證：雖然媒體的犯罪細節(jié)描寫會產(chǎn)生不好的后果，但是不能全部限制。那些純粹為了刺激讀者或觀眾的細節(jié)描寫當然應該限制，但那些為了增加讀者或觀眾知識的細節(jié)描寫，那些為了實現(xiàn)影視正面美學效果的細節(jié)描寫則不必限制。

本范文采用“分類討論”的結構，這也是唐老師個人更喜歡的論證結構。

7分范文

There seems to be more and more detailed criminal description on media these days, such as beating, murdering, gun fighting, blood shedding, among others. As I see it, the excessive exposure to these criminal scenes will negatively influence newspaper readers and TV viewers, thus increasing the likelihood of their committing the same crimes in real life, but to restrict them on media is quite another story.

To follow others is human nature, especially when it comes to doing harms to other people. This is demonstrated by the genocide Nazis committed against Jews in the Second World War. So, the more criminal scenes people witness on media, the more likely they will do the same violence to other people. Even if they are made to believe that these criminal description is fictional (rather than real), the viewers may also cultivate a negative kind of attitude toward the world they live in. They may be led to a belief that the world is far from safe and so they can take every possible measure to protect themselves, including killing others. This is actually one of the important reasons why many felonies have been committed.

Nevertheless, to completely restrict media from giving detailed criminal description is not necessary nor desirable. Those description catering to the low taste of the audiences should, of course, be well controlled, but in many cases, it is important for newspapers or TV programs to offer detailed account of criminal acts, for either educational or aesthetic purposes. The detailed newspaper report, for instance, can arouse people's awareness of how bad a crime is so that they will take action against it; and in some TV programs, the vivid description of a criminal scene is part and parcel of its total aesthetic design.

To conclude, while we generally agree that media should not present too many detailed criminal scenes, those scenes for educational or aesthetic purposes should not be banned.

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老師筆記

There seems to be more and more detailed criminal description on media these days, such as beating, murdering, gun fighting, blood shedding, among others. As I see it, the excessive exposure to these criminal scenes will negatively influence newspaper readers and TV viewers, thus increasing the likelihood of their committing the same crimes in real life, but to restrict them on media is quite another story.

現(xiàn)在，媒體上似乎有越來越詳細的犯罪描述，如毆打、謀殺、槍戰(zhàn)、流血等。在我看來，看到太多類似犯罪場景將對報紙讀者和電視觀眾產(chǎn)生負面影響，從而增加他們在現(xiàn)實生活中犯下同樣罪行的可能性，但在媒體上限制這些描寫則是另一回事。

解析

(1) 本段用列舉法（提供細節(jié)）開頭，然后給出自己的觀點。

(2) Among others 諸如此類，等等

(3) As I see it 在我看來；我認為

(4) Excessive 過多的

(5) Exposure (to) 接觸......；暴露于......之下

(6) Likelihood 可能性

(7) ...is quite another story ......是另外一回事

To follow others is human nature, especially when it comes to doing harms to other people. This is demonstrated by the genocide Nazis committed against Jews in the Second World War. So, the more criminal scenes people witness on media, the more likely they will do the same violence to other people. Even if they are made to believe that these criminal description is fictional (rather than real), the viewers may also cultivate a negative kind of attitude toward the world they live in. They may be led to a belief that the world is far from safe and so they can take every possible measure to protect themselves, including killing others. This is actually one of the important reasons why many felonies have been committed.

跟隨他人是人類本性，特別是當傷害他人時。納粹在第二次世界大戰(zhàn)中對猶太人實施的種族滅絕就是證明。因此，人們在媒體上目睹的犯罪場景越多，他們就越有可能對其他人實施同樣的暴力。即使觀眾終于相信這些犯罪描述是虛構的（而不是真實的），他們也可能養(yǎng)成對生活其中的世界的消極態(tài)度。他們可能會相信世界遠非安全，因此可以采取一切可能的措施來保護自己，包括殺害他人。這實際上是犯下許多重罪的重要原因之一。

解析

(1) 本段討論觀看太多犯罪描寫會引發(fā)犯罪。

(2) Human nature 人類天性

(3) Demonstrate 證明

(4) Genocide 種族滅絕

(5) Fictional 虛構的

(6) Be led to a belief that... 被引導去相信......

(7) Felony 重罪

Nevertheless, to completely restrict media from giving detailed criminal description is not necessary nor desirable. Those description catering to the low taste of the audiences should, of course, be well controlled, but in many cases, it is important for newspapers or TV programs to offer detailed account of criminal acts, for either educational or aesthetic purposes. The detailed newspaper report, for instance, can arouse people's awareness of how bad a crime is so that they will take action against it; and in some TV programs, the vivid description of a criminal scene is part and parcel of its total aesthetic design.

然而，完全限制媒體提供詳細的犯罪描述是不必要的，也是不可取的。當然，那些迎合觀眾低品味的描述應該得到很好的控制，但在許多情況下，報紙或電視節(jié)目必須為教育或?qū)徝滥康脑敿毭枋龇缸镄袨?。例如，詳細的報紙報道可以喚起人們認識到犯罪的嚴重性，因此采取行動來打擊犯罪；在一些電視節(jié)目中，對犯罪現(xiàn)場的生動描述是其整體審美設計的一部分。

解析

(1) 本段通過分類的辦法，討論了哪些犯罪描述應該禁止，而哪些不應該禁止。

(2) Desirable 可取的

(3) Cater to 迎合

(4) Account 敘述；描述

(5) Aesthetic 美學的

(6) Part and parcel 一部分

To conclude, while we generally agree that media should not present too many detailed criminal scenes, those scenes for educational or aesthetic purposes should not be banned.

總之，雖然我們普遍同意媒體不應呈現(xiàn)太多詳細的犯罪場景，但不應禁止那些用于教育或?qū)徝滥康牡膱鼍啊?/p>

解析

(1) 本段總結前面的討論。

(2) Generally 總體上

(3) Present 呈現(xiàn)

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